作者：丁衡祁

有人把“1987 年國務(wù)院批準(zhǔn)唐山市為沿海經(jīng)濟(jì)開放城市”這個(gè)句子翻譯成：In 1987, the State Department approved Tangshan city to be a coastal economic open zone. 這里有四個(gè)問題：第一，把中國的國務(wù)院譯成了美國的國務(wù)院；第二，approve ... to be 這種用法不成立；第三，coastal economic open 這三個(gè)形容詞的排列不當(dāng)；第四，zone 這個(gè)詞在這里不妥。

后來有人對(duì)這個(gè)句子進(jìn)行了重新翻譯，新的譯法是：In 1987, the State Council approved Tangshan being an open city of coastal economy。可是這個(gè)譯文中仍然存在兩個(gè)不妥之處：一是 approve ... being 的用法也不成立；二是 coastal economy 的意思走了樣，“沿海經(jīng)濟(jì)”僅僅相對(duì)“內(nèi)陸經(jīng)濟(jì)”而言，是指具有沿海地區(qū)特色的經(jīng)濟(jì)，如捕漁業(yè)、深海養(yǎng)殖業(yè)、造船業(yè)、海洋運(yùn)輸業(yè)等，這與原文意思不符。

其實(shí)，這個(gè)句子的翻譯方法很多，不下十余種：

In 1987, the State Council approved Tangshan of becoming a coastal city of open economy.（approve ... of becoming這種說法只適合口頭表達(dá)，不宜作為正式的書面語言）

In 1987, the State Council approved / endorsed the establishment of Tangshan as a coastal city of open economy.

In 1987, the State Council granted approval / endorsement to Tangshan as a coastal city of open economy.

In 1987, the State Council granted Tangshan the status of a coastal city of open economy.

In 1987, the State Council endorsed the upgrading / elevating of Tangshan to the status of a coastal city of open economy.

In 1987, the State Council approved / endorsed the motion / proposal of turning Tangshan into a coastal city of open economy.

In 1987, the State Council designated / established Tangshan as a coastal city of open economy. (designate 這種表達(dá)法最為可取，詞典中就有類似的例句：The town has been designated (as) a development area.）

如果要突出唐山這個(gè)地名，還可以用被動(dòng)語態(tài)的形式：Tangshang was designated (as) a coastal city of open economy by the State Council in 1987.

上面的例子說明，即使是一個(gè)比較簡(jiǎn)單的句子，翻譯的方法也是多種多樣。在翻譯的過程中，也貫穿了多探索、多研究、多查閱的“三多”精神。